Monday, November 22, 2010

amader jonno

(1)

Duto janala khola thake.
Amra dujon.
Majkhane ak akash chand.
Amra du-mutho hashir jyostna chhure di.


(2)

Amra khuje choli ondhokar golir majhe
agun pakhir chhana!!
Asholey ki khujchi amra? Nijeder?
Haather kaanch ta ki ayna na magnifying glass?
Amader mukh duto ki ak-i na protifolon?


(3)

Raash purnimar chand dheu-r anchol bhoriye rakhe.
Lal ghor neel ghor amit labanno (no ketoki mitro please).
Kobitar pata ghete khuje chola nijer ostitter chhaya
R kothao ogochore anguler faakey anguler atmo-somorpon

4 comments:

  1. ok
    aaaaaaahhhhhhhhhhh
    wat lines
    what words what emotions
    aaaahhhhhhh

    amrita, ur words are like fountains giving life to a world where beauty, truth and emotions surpass the general mileau of a commoner's experiences....its a dreamland where fantasies become realities

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  2. heavy to. kobita gulo boddo valo chilo. expressive.tui vishon valo likhchis ajkal.
    mon chuye jay.

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  3. I have traveled from afar, from distant lands on horseback, crossed dangerous terrain and fought many dragons and now I am here my lady. I come bearing gifts, the gifts of pure love. Take my hand and I shall show u a world where dreams come true, where I can mesmerize you with desire and joy, with fulfillment and ecstasy like no other. Come....step into my world.

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  4. shobhini,i am really impressed. tui chhele hoe ja, noile tokey biye korte parbona. and sing for me, ... tenu chand ki main churi pehnawa, tu kar de ishara main doli le awa... gal mitthi mitthi bol... love ya! wish i was ur girl yaar. wud hv nvr left ur arms, stayed bahon ki darmiyan... forever

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