Tuesday, July 3, 2012

The Ride

I wanted to look at the mirror
He could not see my reflection
Air flowed through every vein
Our smiles mingled in the speed

3 comments:

  1. I like the vision of your words~ Your third line did surprise and change the course of the poem! (as it should) Well Done~

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  2. thank u very much ella. that wud b a huge inspiration for me dear lady :)

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