Saturday, April 9, 2011

Valentine's Day

Naked
Upon a lilac field
Covered in pollen grains
They come walking
Towards a grave.

*
Soft petals
Caress their feet
And drench their colours
With skin.
Dark lilacs
Flowers of sin.

**
Folded in union
From head to toe
Stomachs stuffed inside
Skin tightened
Beyond sufference
Cracks appear behind.

***
A complete O
Orgasmic circle?
A painful hole
Within ...
Torn cardiac muscles.
Crushed lilacs bleed.

****
Beauty is a trade of time
Love,a prostitution of dreams
With fake words to lust.
Love, a dreadful sin.
Lilacs dig into the flesh
And kill all innocence
Within ...
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7 comments:

  1. tiny wish potApril 9, 2011 at 11:01 PM

    i can smell the fresh blood oozing out of the heart .....well expressed emotions

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  2. DebanjaliApril 14, 2011 at 8:51 PM

    very well written; vivid images.... wont comment on the holistic idea but very cogent in every way

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  3. arijita senApril 14, 2011 at 8:52 PM

    aami kobita toh khub ekta bujhi na, ny understanding is based simply on my liking & i like all tht u have written, actually i had liked all tht u hd strted since school:)

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  4. soumeeApril 14, 2011 at 8:53 PM

    besh strong laglo poetry ta, but janina keno prothom stanza ta pore strong kono chobi mathay elo na hothat kore ekta soft chobi vese uthlo, mone ache "fire" e sei mastard field ta back ground e sei basni... :)

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  5. priyanka podderApril 14, 2011 at 8:54 PM

    feeln our school days amrita! tui to barabar bhalo likhishhh..d piece z very comodating......touching many spheres... an unimously whole piece.but last para tar 2nd line ta z an universal truth.....eta anek bar bhebechi ghurie-phire...but aage kakhono eta atto exact words e put kara jaini,i sud thank u alot for dis honey!! keep ur pen climbing heights!

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  6. manas kumarApril 14, 2011 at 8:55 PM

    strong and vivid write some more

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  7. soumeeApril 14, 2011 at 9:07 PM

    Hunu,tor ei chhobi ta j ki shundor ki bolbo.Jodi chhele hotam to boltam tumi ato maya kotha theke pao?Sob jala jontrona bhule gelam ami aj ei chhobi tuku dekhe.Ki shundor j laglo amar ei chhobi ta,akdom pure and serene.Thik jano,chhanche debi durgar soddo toiri hoa mukh,rong porar agey.Ki bhison pobitro r mayamoy.Hunu janli,presidency college theke berolam jodi karo mukh moner ondore rekhe to se tor mukh tuku shudu,baki sob itihash.Kebol tor mukh tuku sombol niye paar holam presidency-r oi baranda tuku seshbar.Khub bhalobashi tokey hunu r bhishon miss kori.

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